T1+Persuade

==== L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points. E ffective position statement: S.C. we can ====
 * Make our position and purpose clear
 * Use a rhetorical question
 * Include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics


 * __Monday 14th March 2011__ **

Tauranga Intermediate  30 18th Avenue  Tauranga

 Dear Mr Diver

 I believe that last weeks reward of having extending morning tea time made all students and staff very happy. I am writing to you to ask if this is possible to continue so every Friday we can have extra morning tea on the condition that we must come in and out of class straight away as soon as the bell rings just like last week. I bet you would of wanted more play time when you were a kid ?

 Giving extended morning tea will not only help the students, it will also effect on staff as well in a good way. If any teachers are behind in marking or any other work they will not have to worry about what time it is or how long they have to go before the bell rings because they will know they also have the extra time to do their teacher work or if finished go outside and play with the students.

 It will help students because they will get more fitness of having extra time to run around and play. Running around also helps increase higher Numeracy and Maths results as my friend’s science fair proves.

 Also having extra morning tea time will make everyone happier in Tauranga Intermediate School. This can also give Tauranga Intermediate a good reputation to the public, by the students telling their parents how they earned extra morning tea time and then the parents telling their friends, so on.

 As you can see there are so much positives of having extra intervel time every Friday. Even if there is no change to the morning tea time thank you for your valuable time of reading this letter.

 Yours Sincerely, Thomas Hollins  Room 41, Rimu House